Comic 21 - "Adult" "Supervision"
24th May 2021, 8:00 AM
in Social Media
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1. The kids squint at the screen.Jamie: If you look very carefully…
George: There's this bit at the bottom that's a bit darker than the rest!
Caroline: Er, guys, that's a mole!
2. Cass: This is how much it sucks to be a woman, kids! Even your moles get sexualized. \
George: Er, sorry?
3. Cass looks straight at the kids.
Cass: Hey, were you going to play with that crossbow without adult supervision?
Caroline: Yep, that was the idea!
4. Cass emerges from her RV with a large hand bow.
Cass: Are you sure?
Caroline: On second thought, these two could poke each other's eyes out tying their own shoelaces. Do supervise us!
5. Large, Cass and the kids have set up the target and are practicing. Cass is pulling her bow as the kids watch.
George: Cass, why don't you just use a social media place that’s less stuck up?
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burstlion
24th May 2021, 3:05 PM
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Fantastic work! Great tease with the panel posted to DA, the fact that she just wants to get in on the Archery fun is really cool!
I was unhappy about every aspect of the last comic's art, so I'm going to try a few different things to prevent that from happening again. One thing I'm gonna do is get away from the stage bound Martin Branner/Robert van der Kroft approach and add some more variety to the drawings.
Next up, I think I'm going to work on making these wide panels better composed. They've been a problem since the start of the comic and it's time I fixed that. Luckily, I get to try the same environment again next week.